With an increasing overweight population some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses. To what extent do you agree?.

Obesity has become a major problem in almost every country, some
people
suggest that the universities make all
students
participate in
sport
regardless of their subjects. I completely disagree with
this
view since not everyone wants to study
sport
, so it should be an optional course.
In addition
, exercise is not the only way to lose weight. To start with,
sport
is not something that every student could do and some
students
do
also
not enjoy it, if we force them to learn about the
sport
, it will make them dislike or hate
sport
than before.
For example
,
people
get frustrated every time when other
people
make them do activities they do not want to do, so it will be obviously better if the
students
can make a choice.
Moreover
, playing sports is not the only activity that an overweight person could do to reduce their weight. They can
also
do other activities
instead
,
for instance
, going on a diet or consulting with a professional to find the most suitable way for them. When someone gets a piece of advice from some
people
whom they know that expert with
this
field, even if they have to do some exercises or play some sports, they will definitely do it, unlike being forced by universities. In conclusion, the obesity problem should not be fixed by making every student take part in sports, because the
students
should choose each subject by themself.
Additionally
, there are more ways to get rid of their weight.
Submitted by Bussara.bb2804 on

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