Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Many people claim that children from poorer
families
deal with their
life
problems better than those from rich
families
. In my opinion, I do not think a child from a middle-income family can solve his or her
life
issues better than a rich one. On one hand, growing up in a rich family means you can inherit the best educational resources.
This
means,
besides
the top academic teaching channels, kids from
such
families
can
also
gain the best ethical tutors teaching them how to deal with challenges in
life
.
For example
, in many royal
families
, they will teach the
next
generation how to make the best choice for their marriage and how to evaluate their own capability for a proper job. Trained younger, children from financially sufficient
families
can gain a better learning environment.
Hence
, they are more likely to lead a successful
life
in the future.
On the other hand
, children from relatively poor
families
do not necessarily possess the capability to face difficulties in
life
. In fact, most of the time, parents in
such
families
are busy working, so they might more easily ignore their kid’s growth.
However
, without enough information, no one can be truly competent for their marriage problem or challenges in the job.
Furthermore
, due to the lack of financial support,
this
group of kids are more likely to lack healthier self-affirmation, which is a very essential quality for their
further
development in
life
. They might have a sense of inferiority which contributes nothing to their future development. In conclusion, growing in a rich family doesn’t mean you are incapable of challenges in
life
.
Instead
, a person from a wealthy family is more likely to succeed in
life
.
Submitted by Esther on

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