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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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Many people claim that children from poorer
families
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 deal with their
life
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 problems better than those from rich
families
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. In my opinion, I do not think a child from a middle-income family can solve his or her
life
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 issues better than a rich one. On one hand, growing up in a rich family means you can inherit the best educational resources.
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 means,
besides
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 the top academic teaching channels, kids from
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families
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 can
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 gain the best ethical tutors teaching them how to deal with challenges in
life
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.
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, in many royal
families
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, they will teach the
next
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 generation how to make the best choice for their marriage and how to evaluate their own capability for a proper job. Trained younger, children from financially sufficient
families
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 can gain a better learning environment.
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, they are more likely to lead a successful
life
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 in the future.
On the other hand
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, children from relatively poor
families
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 do not necessarily possess the capability to face difficulties in
life
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. In fact, most of the time, parents in
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families
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 are busy working, so they might more easily ignore their kid’s growth.
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, without enough information, no one can be truly competent for their marriage problem or challenges in the job.
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, due to the lack of financial support,
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 group of kids are more likely to lack healthier self-affirmation, which is a very essential quality for their
further
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 development in
life
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. They might have a sense of inferiority which contributes nothing to their future development. In conclusion, growing in a rich family doesn’t mean you are incapable of challenges in
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.
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, a person from a wealthy family is more likely to succeed in
life
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.
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