Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other part of lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. what are the problems of this? Suggest some solutions.

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Hi Ralph, Thank you for the email! I'm glad to hear from you. I'm sorry I couldn't answer earlier because I was busy with my exams. In your
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you asked me about
clothes
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. I think that wearing different
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helps teens express themselves. As for me, I like to dress up.
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I buy
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every two months. My
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shop is "Uniqlo"
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because there are a lot of basic and quality
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. I think everyone should buy the kind of
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they want, regardless of fashion.  By the way, I'd like to know about your shopping. Do you
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? How often do you go to a shopping mall? What kind of shopping do you prefer? I've to go
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my homework now. Keep in touch! Yours, Lisa
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