Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of momey. Governments must invest money in public services instead. To what extend, do you agree or disagree?

In our ever-changing world, it is argued by a group of people that these days, the authorities should spend a large amount of their budget on

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public

assistances

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rather than the

arts

, since

this

is a waste of finance. From my perspective,

although

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agree that it is necessary to

spending

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money

for

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public services, I do not think spending on the

arts

is a waste of

money

. There are several reasons for spending a significant amount of

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budget on public services.

First

and foremost, ensuring that every person in the country can

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a decent standard of living with high-quality public services

such

as hospitals, schools and infrastructures is very essential.

For example

, if the

government

does not spend enough

money

on hospitals, the health of society especially the labour force will decline.

Furthermore

, if the schools do not have sufficient funds, the children may not be properly educated.

Also

, administrations can use

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to make a huge difference in the lives of million

residents

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by funding programs

which

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are

desgined

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designed

to educate, feed and house the disadvantaged, impoverished and

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old, sick people around the country.

However

,

this

does not mean that investing in

arts

is ludicrous and completely neglected.

To begin

, it is difficult for many

arts

institutions to generate much profit, so without

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help from the

government

, many

theatre

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or art exhibitions can be shut down because of bankruptcy.

In addition

,

arts

play a vital role in our lives especially our mental, physical health as

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effective

entertaiment

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entertainment

tool.

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of individuals have admitted that they often

recieve

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receive

received

a great deal of pleasure from enjoying and watching

arts

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performances or joining any handicrafts,

arts

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activities,

hence

, it is very important that the

government

should

assists

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such

instituitions

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institutions

institution

so that they can continue to provide entertainment to the public. In conclusion, there are clear merits of funding for the communal facilities as

this

influences quality of life for nearly all of us. That said, I have to argue that spending

budget

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on the

arts

is not a waste of

money

as

this

too provides numerous positive impacts.