Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of momey. Governments must invest money in public services instead. To what extend, do you agree or disagree?

In our ever-changing world, it is argued by a group of people that these days, the authorities should spend a large amount of their budget on
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rather than the
arts
, since
this
is a waste of finance. From my perspective,
although
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agree that it is necessary to
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public services, I do not think spending on the
arts
is a waste of
money
. There are several reasons for spending a significant amount of
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budget on public services.
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and foremost, ensuring that every person in the country can
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a decent standard of living with high-quality public services
such
as hospitals, schools and infrastructures is very essential.
For example
, if the
government
does not spend enough
money
on hospitals, the health of society especially the labour force will decline.
Furthermore
, if the schools do not have sufficient funds, the children may not be properly educated.
Also
, administrations can use
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to make a huge difference in the lives of million
residents
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by funding programs
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are
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to educate, feed and house the disadvantaged, impoverished and
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old, sick people around the country.
However
,
this
does not mean that investing in
arts
is ludicrous and completely neglected.
To begin
, it is difficult for many
arts
institutions to generate much profit, so without
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help from the
government
, many
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or art exhibitions can be shut down because of bankruptcy.
In addition
,
arts
play a vital role in our lives especially our mental, physical health as
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tool.
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of individuals have admitted that they often
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a great deal of pleasure from enjoying and watching
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performances or joining any handicrafts,
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activities,
hence
, it is very important that the
government
should
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such
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so that they can continue to provide entertainment to the public. In conclusion, there are clear merits of funding for the communal facilities as
this
influences quality of life for nearly all of us. That said, I have to argue that spending
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on the
arts
is not a waste of
money
as
this
too provides numerous positive impacts.
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