Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of momey. Governments must invest money in public services instead. To what extend, do you agree or disagree?

In our ever-changing world, it is argued by a group of people that these days, the authorities should spend a large amount of their budget on

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rather than the

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is a waste of finance. From my perspective,

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agree that it is necessary to

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money

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public services, I do not think spending on the

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is a waste of

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. There are several reasons for spending a significant amount of

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budget on public services.

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and foremost, ensuring that every person in the country can

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a decent standard of living with high-quality public services

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as hospitals, schools and infrastructures is very essential.

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, if the

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does not spend enough

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on hospitals, the health of society especially the labour force will decline.

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, if the schools do not have sufficient funds, the children may not be properly educated.

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, administrations can use

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to make a huge difference in the lives of million

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by funding programs

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to educate, feed and house the disadvantaged, impoverished and

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old, sick people around the country.

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does not mean that investing in

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is ludicrous and completely neglected.

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, it is difficult for many

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institutions to generate much profit, so without

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help from the

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, many

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or art exhibitions can be shut down because of bankruptcy.

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,

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play a vital role in our lives especially our mental, physical health as

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effective

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entertainment

tool.

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of individuals have admitted that they often

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a great deal of pleasure from enjoying and watching

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arts

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performances or joining any handicrafts,

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arts

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activities,

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, it is very important that the

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so that they can continue to provide entertainment to the public. In conclusion, there are clear merits of funding for the communal facilities as

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influences quality of life for nearly all of us. That said, I have to argue that spending

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on the

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is not a waste of

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as

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too provides numerous positive impacts.