Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is true that there is an obvious increase in awareness of protecting the
environment
among the public. Knowing the importance of the
environment
, many
people
do little about it. In
this
essay, I will discuss the reason behind
this
phenomenon and show ways that
individuals
can take to protect the
environment
. There are two main reasons why lots of
people
make
less
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to protect the
environment
.
Firstly
, some
people
think that environmental problems are too big for
individuals
to address.
For example
, many
people
regard these problems, like air pollution and greenhouse gas, as the real ones, which need the international cooperation of countries all over the world, rather than being done by
individuals
.
Secondly
, they
also
reckon governments should be responsible for the action of protecting the
environment
.
For instance
,
although
they know that depleting trees would exert a series of environmental influences,
such
as soil erosion, they still
use
disposable chopsticks as they think abandoning their way of life is unworthy and the government could do it well. In short, those who make little effort to protect the
environment
have ignored the effects that
individuals
can have on it. In my opinion, tons of actions can be adopted by
individuals
to protect our planet. For one thing,
people
can choose to
use
public transport as much as possible, because reducing the utility of private cars could alleviate gas emissions which is the main source of air pollution in cities. Another activity is that recycling
use
plastics
that
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is
also
a
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main pollution factor due to
its
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non-
degradated
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nature. Take plastic bags as an example, because of their convenience, many
people
would
use
them when shopping and
then
use
them as garbage bags put in the bin.
As a result
, a great deal of bags
are
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buried under the ground, which could pollute the soil permanently. In a nutshell, ignoring the strength of
individuals
for protecting the
environment
, many
people
do less than talk, but these simple and feasible tips deserve more attention from ordinary
people
.
Therefore
, I firmly believe that average
people
could make great contributions to environmental problems.
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