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Although there is a lot of translation soft wear available learning a language still cut be adventageous to wat extend do you agre or disagree.

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I can't entirely disagree with
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 question .I assume that mastering a foreign language is necessary for every person .It helps
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 to feel assured in foreign lands or parts
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 using equipment for translation has become popular in our life .But a huge number of issues will happen if the app misunderstands your spelling or pronunciation .
For instance
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 us tongue ad China French Spanish or Uzbek concentrated on sounds and spelling and
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 ,one word can have various meanings according to the pronunciation . To cite another example , when some population translate the same words from Uzbek into English translators always makes mistakes and does not understand the accent .
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 really only applications. From point of view, almost everyone should into foreign speeches if they want to be understood correctly .
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, translators make our life easier. I do not give very great opportunities to communicate with tourists . There are many nations in the world who cannot or their circumstances do not allow learning foreign languages . In the other words, a company employee about 50 years old must go
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business trip to China . He will not be able to master Chinese in a certain amount of time . ,
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 tongue is considered the most difficult speech to master which consists of over 100 characters . In conclusion , I reiterate that during the age of modern devices it seems that learning other languages is a waste of time due to beneficial technologies is consume time can fast and quite correct translate data . Learning is always beneficial for a person to survive in a country where everyone uses a local way to communicate with each other .
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