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Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent is this a positive or negative trend?

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Nowadays, it is common in some
countries
 to
import
 food from other
countries
instead
 of cultivating them
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 their own. In my perspective,
this
 is a positive trend. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view and give supporting reasons for my idea.
To begin
 with, the main reason why some
countries
 choose to
import
 food is the weather and geographical situation. Some
foods
 like nuts need dry and cold weather which is not possible for every country to cultivate them so there is no way except importing them Because if they want to prepare these criteria, they have to use high technology which needs a lot of money.
As a result
, it is more economical to
import
 them.
Besides
 that,
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 amount of water is needed for cultivating some fruits and
foods
 like watermelons and crops.
In addition
, some
countries
 even don’t have good soil for cultivating them.
For example
, in some
countries
 like Emirates or Saudi
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 it is impossible to cultivate in the vast part of the country because the soil doesn’t have enough nutrients.
However
, it is true that
some times
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 it is more economical to produce these food products or fruits in our country but it can’t be ignored that the value of all the things we need to prepare for some
foods
 are more than the price we sell so it is better to
import
 them from other parts of the world. To sum up, I would argue that importing some kind of
foods
 from other
countries
 is a positive trend because of the reasons mentioned in
this
 essay.
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