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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
It is important to consider why many book and newspaper was converted online. While there are many benefits to be easier to reading anything with new technology, there are
also
 are many people think against that. I completely agree with the statement that it will be more useful to get books and journals from different websites. On the one hand, many people who believe there is difficult to might agree that it can be hardness to be concerned when reading without paper books.
This
 is because
such
 disputes can create in that case, which does not can fill comfortable when you are reading in the websites.
For example
, there are many preferring when reading to touch
this
 paper texture.
In contrast
, if there is want to travel or transfer to a new place, there will be much difficult to transfer these and may be destroyed.
On the other hand
, my view is that
this
 conflict is important because it can help to understand to improve the technology and find their many alternatives for reading. The reason for
this
 is can be saving these books and important information in that in many after ages.
For instance
, the internet will be more reliable for getting a newer book.
In addition
, it will be affordable for students to get their needs more easily. If their idea does spread between different ages, it will be useful when travelling and easy to get learning. In conclusion, despite the reading on printed papers which people thinking direction to online ,reading it is my firm belief that
this
 time of convert is a vital step on the path to becoming freely.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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