Teachers are not as important as they used to be because of the choice of other alternatives for students, such as online teaching. To what extent to do you agree of disagree?

Due to the options available for
students
to learn, it is now believed that
teachers
are less relevant. In my opinion, I disagree that
teachers
are of no relevance.
This
essay will look at the consequences of
students
replacing
teachers
with online learning and
also
the negative impact
this
will cause in the
community
,
for instance
, losses of jobs. Studying online can seem like a great option to have to learn from a teacher but,
that is
not the case. The insight a teacher who have full understanding and knowledge into the subject they teach gives them superiority over studying online.
This
is so because they are capable of providing a better understanding to the
students
than they would get online.
For instance
, I studied for an English course online several weeks before seating for the exam and I failed,
then
I decided to pay for the services of an English tutor who taught me better ways to improve my English weeks after, I wrote the exam and passed. So,
teachers
are very much needed to gain a better understanding of the subject than learning online.
Furthermore
, the more
students
use online teaching, it poses a threat to
teachers
jobs thereby causing joblessness in the
community
.
Hence
,
this
would result in jobless
teachers
relying on the
government
for support, and
also
crime rate would increase in the
community
as a result
. With
this
in mind, it puts a strain on the
government
and forces the
government
to lose sight of other sectors that requires
government
funding. So
also
, the loss of properties in the
community
and reduces the rate of living in the
community
. In conclusion, online education should be used to a minimum because if overused could lead to more harm than good.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technological revolution
  • access to information
  • self-learning
  • personalized learning paths
  • learning styles
  • one-size-fits-all approach
  • traditional classrooms
  • flexibility
  • online education
  • commitments
  • social skills
  • emotional intelligence
  • mentorship
  • support
  • blended learning
  • guiding
  • facilitating
  • enhancing
  • quality of education
  • inspire and motivate
  • holistic educational experience
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