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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is true that the number of
languages
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 around the globe is diminishing every year. While the rising popularity of English and the ease of life associated with it make people think that the extinction of some smaller
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 is not something to worry about, I strongly oppose
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 assumption. In my opinion, there are two negative aspects of
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 development
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 as the cultural values and the practical ones. On the one hand, there are cultural aspects in tandem with the obliteration of
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 in danger as each
language
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 has an inextricable relationship with a part of human culture and presents long-term history.
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, every
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 carries its own cultural code, which encrypts both the psychology and philosophy of a nation’s spirit.
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, through the
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, one can study not only the culture of a particular ethnicity
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 its economic and social achievements.
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, when a
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 died somewhere on the planet, we lose a part of human nature.
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, people cannot underestimate the practical side stemming from the usage of a single international
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 as international trade, economic relations, tourism, and medicine.
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, there are practical values stemming from the use of rare
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.
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, the US army widely used some of the dying Indian
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 to secure information processes between the army’s units.
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, there are some practical values in keeping the disappearing
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 alive. To sum up, while it is undeniable that the more and more popular usage of English has many merits in people’s life, it is extremely vital to preserve smaller
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 because the extinction of some minor
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 could worsen the world civilization and deprive it of many practical benefits.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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