In some country, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweight the disadvantages.
An increasing number of grown-up population in many countries carry on to reside with their
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and the property will be taken care of.
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, quite often young adults plan of separating from their nurturers.
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Conversely
, the merits of growing up and continuing to live with Linking Words
parents
are numerous. Use synonyms
Firstly
, mature people gain moral and emotional backing from their Linking Words
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during hardships. As young people sometimes face challenges in their life, it's Use synonyms
parents
who never give up on them. Use synonyms
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his parent's emotional support helped him to recover from the situation.
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many senior citizens are spending their lives in old Add a comma
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homes because of their wards being living separately. Use synonyms
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can live happily.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...