In some country, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweight the disadvantages.
An increasing number of grown-up population in many countries carry on to reside with their
parents
even though they have attained their degrees and possess good jobs. Although
there are chances of a dispute between children
and parents
, they will also
achieve significant benefits such
as strong support to their parents
in their old age
and the property will be taken care of.
Nuclear families enjoy the benefit of being remaining away from disputes and disagreements between parents
and ward. but this
is difficult in Joint families wherein many a times quarrels exist as a result
of differences in opinions. For instance
, my brother-in-law lives with his parents
and they always have understanding issues and end up fighting with each other. Therefore
, quite often young adults plan of separating from their nurturers.
Conversely
, the merits of growing up and continuing to live with parents
are numerous. Firstly
, mature people gain moral and emotional backing from their parents
during hardships. As young people sometimes face challenges in their life, it's parents
who never give up on them. For example
, my cousin was going through tough times as his girlfriend was unfaithful to him, ,however
his parent's emotional support helped him to recover from the situation.
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,however
Secondly
, children
act as financial and moral support for their parents
in their old age
. ,,
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Moreover
many senior citizens are spending their lives in old Add a comma
,Moreover
age
homes because of their wards being living separately. On the contrary
, if adults decide to live in the same home parents
can survive a stress-free life with their family. To illustrate, in India most of the offspring don't separate from their parents
even though they have achieved their career goals. As a , result
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parents
and children
can live happily.
To conclude, many adults in some nations prefer living with their parents
for varied reasons. From my perspective, the benefits of this
overshadow the drawbacks and I believe that in other countries too children
should not leave their parents
alone in their old age
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...