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The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia
#news #canada #australia
The two bar graphs illustrate methods of accepting the
news
 between
Canada
 and
Australia
.
It is clear that
 the largest numbers of
people
 are using online resources to access
news
 in
Australia
, and
TV
 is the most popular way
of
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 Canadians to accept
news
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the news
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.
By contrast
,
people
 who go
through
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to
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radio
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the radio
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getting
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to get
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news
 are the lowest figure in these two countries. Approximately 52% of Australians use the internet to get information and the
TV
 is not far behind (37%).
Also
, the total percentage of
people
 using
TV
 and the internet receiving
news
 is approximately 90%.
By contrast
, the most welcome method of accessing the
news
 in
Canada
 is
TV
, at 40% which is followed closely by
internet
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 (36%). Actually, in these two countries, the proportion of
people
 who choose television is roughly equal. The percentage of
people
 who use
radio
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 to get
news
 in
Canada
 (7%) has tripled in
Australia
 (2%). And, the proportion of
people
 using print (14%) to get information in
Canada
 is twice as high as the proportion in
Australia
 (7%).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "by contrast".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words news, canada, australia, people, tv with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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