The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia
The two bar graphs illustrate methods of accepting the
news
between
Canada
and
Australia
.
It is clear that
the largest numbers of
people
are using online resources to access
news
in
Australia
, and
TV
is the most popular way
of
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Canadians to accept
news
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the news
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.
By contrast
,
people
who go
through
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to
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radio
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getting
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news
are the lowest figure in these two countries. Approximately 52% of Australians use the internet to get information and the
TV
is not far behind (37%).
Also
, the total percentage of
people
using
TV
and the internet receiving
news
is approximately 90%.
By contrast
, the most welcome method of accessing the
news
in
Canada
is
TV
, at 40% which is followed closely by
internet
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(36%). Actually, in these two countries, the proportion of
people
who choose television is roughly equal. The percentage of
people
who use
radio
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to get
news
in
Canada
(7%) has tripled in
Australia
(2%). And, the proportion of
people
using print (14%) to get information in
Canada
is twice as high as the proportion in
Australia
(7%).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "by contrast".
Vocabulary: Replace the words news, canada, australia, people, tv with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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