Business & cultural exchange between countries is increasing and this is thought to be a positive development by some. However, others believe that it might lead to loss of identity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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An often debated topic is whether exchanging trade and lifestyle between multiple
countries
is a positive or negative development towards the identity of one's nation. Both sides of the argument with be discussed in
this
essay before the conclusion is reached. In my opinion, I firmly believe that professional and ethical exchange between states helps in positive growth towards nations identities. On the one hand, there are several factors that show swapping
work
and ethnic lifestyle between communities are vital for the kingdom.
First
and foremost, switching of
work
from the other provinces not only helped financially but
also
helps in the development of the kingdom's people by generating more
employment
for them.
Moreover
, Cultural exchange
also
helps in identifying the cultural value of one's province into multiple territories.
For example
, in 2016 a movie which was created by me and my few friends got selected in the Germany Film festival
as a result
, we got multiple projects from them which helped me in creating various
employment
for people in my state.
On the other hand
, swapping cultural values between the
countries
is not a good idea
thus
,sometimes it may impact the identities
also
.Significantly, exchanging of
work
between territories has an adverse effect on
employment
and economical values. As
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Nowadays Animation companies in India are more focused on getting
work
done from abroad in order to get more TRPs and fame in the industry which
as a result
they are generating less
employment
for native families. In conclusion, switching of trade and lifestyle between kingdoms plays an important role in the growth of the
countries
, unless only when organisation take care of local communities. In my opinion, we should exchange business and cultures between
countries
.
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