some people think that children should begin formal education at a very early age. others think they should begin after 7 years of age. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A certain number of public believe that kids ought to be started normal subjects from the primary level

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of start since the age of 7.In my opinion, it is a ridiculous decision to put more pressure to learn when the

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of play days, we will discuss more details in the following paragraphs.

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and foremost, The scholar mental capacity develops very fastly in the occasion of below upper primary school level

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, high-level teaching

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them more stress and it may affect their creativeness of mind.

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, they like to play a lot and

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them around

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really able to make them feels happy all

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, one of my friends' daughters named Sara, who just turns to 6 and

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to follow kids games and watch cartoons at most of the moment when I visited her home.

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, in

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era, parents are

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very much curious about them and most of the guardians do not push them to study a lesson

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of play

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they have busy with their job or daily activities.

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, it is very tough to catch higher-

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lessons for the little ones and it will not assist to polish their life.

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, a small number of communities say that it is mandatory and

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may help them to prepare themselves perfectly before

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school.

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point is some nations have been following

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method to make them as

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from the lower level of classes.

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, in Japan,

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school management decided to implement

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programme in 2007 but it has stopped

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physical ability. In conclusion, there are several positive sides

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after seven and many negative sides before the age to start education system. In my

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, as I said earlier kids must enjoy the

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of their play days before the age of 7.