some people think that children should begin formal education at a very early age. others think they should begin after 7 years of age. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A certain number of public believe that kids ought to be started normal subjects from the primary level
instead
of start since the age of 7.In my opinion, it is a ridiculous decision to put more pressure to learn when the time
of play days, we will discuss more details in the following paragraphs.
First
and foremost, The scholar mental capacity develops very fastly in the occasion of below upper primary school level therefore
, high-level teaching give
them more stress and it may affect their creativeness of mind.Change the verb form
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Moreover
, they like to play a lot and very
inquisitive to watch things happenAdd a missing verb
are very
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around
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them around
this
really able to make them feels happy all time
. For instance
, one of my friends' daughters named Sara, who just turns to 6 and eager
to follow kids games and watch cartoons at most of the moment when I visited her home.Add a missing verb
was eager
Secondly
, in this
era, parents are also
very much curious about them and most of the guardians do not push them to study a lesson instead
of play also
spending
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spend
time
with them while,
they have busy with their job or daily activities.Remove the comma
apply
In addition
, it is very tough to catch higher-levell
lessons for the little ones and it will not assist to polish their life.
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level
On the other hand
, a small number of communities say that it is mandatory and this
may help them to prepare themselves perfectly before to take
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taking
an
admission Remove the article
apply
in
school. Change preposition
to
An another
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Another
debate
point is some nations have been following Change the verb form
debating
this
method to make them as genious
from the lower level of classes.Correct your spelling
genius
For example
, in Japan, a
school management decided to implement Remove the article
apply
this
programme in 2007 but it has stopped becasue
of many negative Correct your spelling
because
impact
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impacts
occured
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occurred
of
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on
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children's
children
childrens
physical ability.
In conclusion, there are several positive sides Change to a genitive case
children's
of
after seven and many negative sides before the age to start education system. In my Replace the word
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opionion
, as I said earlier kids must enjoy the Correct your spelling
opinion
time
of their play days before the age of 7.Submitted by rahul.gauri00 on
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