Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea ora waste of time?

University
is one of the most important
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in the education system of all the countries in the world. Nowadays, lots of
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decided to spend 1 -year gap before studying at the
university
in order to pay a visit to other countries or obtain more experience for work. In my opinion,
this
is absolutely a great idea and, in
this
essay, I will explain why.
First
of all, travelling can help
students
broaden their minds in many new environments before they attend
university
.
For instance
, Asian
students
who go to America for visiting or relaxing can approach many new cultures, they observe foreigners' actions and
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when dealing with things. Because of
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they imply into their daily life,
university
after that won’t be a difficult task for gap year
student
.
Besides
students
have to study at least one language during their travelling time, which build up their confidence and diplomatic skills.
Secondly
, many
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spend
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a year
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also
shows that they have more potential in their future jobs. Whatever it is, a part-time or a full-time job,
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will gain more experience
such
as in dealing with customers, coordinators, coworkers etc.
For example
, if they sell coffee they will know how beverages are made, how to serve the customer and with which attitudes should they should approach others.
Additionally
, in some jobs, it
also
has certain recommendations to put in your CV and from
thereafter
the
university
, they will have more opportunities cause most of the interviewer's requirement is experience. In conclusion, it is a good idea for many
students
to spend a 1-year gap
instead
of studying directly at the
university
after high school because it not only opens their minds to new cultures, builds their language skills but
also
gives them more experiences to support their career path.
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