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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions on how to send it back to you

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Dear Dhruvi, I hope that you are doing well. I'm writing regarding our recent vacation together. First and foremost, thank you for inviting me to your house for the Diwali vacation. I had the most amazing time with you and your loving family for the
festival
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 of
lights
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, it will be always an unforgettable memory for me.
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, as soon as I got back home, I quickly realized that I
forgot
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had left
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 my wallet in your room. And as much as I remember, I think I saw that
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 time in the left-hand side drawer, close to the window.
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 a green
colored
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 Coach purse engraved with my name on the
back side
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backside
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.
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, I would much appreciate
if
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 you could deliver it to my place through the Canada Post. Please use the express service and mention that
this
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 is a personal item and add insurance for that.
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, let me know how much
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all these
cost
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 you and I will transfer you the money. Sorry for any inconvenience
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 may cause you in advance and thank you again for having me for holidays. Warm regards, Ruchin Patel

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task achievement
Consider elaborating a bit more on your feelings or experiences during the holiday to enhance the task achievement.
coherence cohesion
In your explanation about the wallet, provide a clearer description of the events leading up to forgetting it to improve coherence.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a warm and friendly tone throughout, which is perfect for the intended audience and context.
logical structure
The letter includes a clear introduction, middle, and conclusion, which enhances logical structure.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • memorable
  • grateful
  • remarkable
  • incident
  • essential
  • postage
  • courier
  • identification
  • reimburse
  • parcel
  • delivery method
  • anticipate
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