You have visited another city in your country. Prior to the visit you requested some information from a tourist centre, but the information was incorrect. Write a letter to the manager of the centre and say - What information were you looking for? - What was incorrect in it? - What happened to you because of it.

Dear Mr Ranjeet, My name is John Mayor. I recently visited Ahmedabad. Before visiting the city,

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had requested some

information

from your tourist

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regarding

the heritage walk. I am writing

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letter to you, in regards to the

information

provided by your centre to me.

Firstly

, I would like to thank you for providing the

information

in a very short time frame. Based on the

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provided by your centre,

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planned my entire visit.

However

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would like to draw to your attention that, some of the

information

provided regarding the time and

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location

for the start of

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walk was incorrect. The

information

shared had details about the walk starting from Sabarmati Ashram whereas it started from Siddi Saiyed.

Also

, it was stated that the walk starts at 8AM,

however

, it started at 7AM. We missed the morning heritage walk and we had to plan for

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walk.

This

created

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of confusion and due to which we had to change our other following plans. The tourist centre has moral duty to should share

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relevant

correct

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with the travellers. The misleading

information

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causes

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inconvenience

and

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results in loss of time.

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should be avoided

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of all. In

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conclusion

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would request you to kindly share precise data and provide

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the contact

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better communication in future. Thank you and Regards. John Mayor