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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of Technology. In what ways has Technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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As
technology
 has changed the face of interaction among
people
, there are
mutiple
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multiple
 ways how
people
 can communicate without meeting each other. In my opinion, the development of
technology
 has brought
the
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 negative impact on
people
's relationships. In earlier times,
people
 use to meet and greet and celebrate festivals together but nowadays they prefer to wish their loved one over social media or over a call. With
this
 state-of-the-art
technology
,
people
 have become emotionally retarded. The sense of physical meeting and sharing thoughts
has
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lost
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 among them. In a recent survey by Google, approximately 78% of the
people
 prefer to talk virtually rather than
physical
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 meetings. Clearly,
the
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technology
 has given a new shape to the methods of communication.
Furthermore
, there are over 1000 social media websites where
people
 can meet strangers, without actually knowing them.
This
 has created a worrisome situation among communities. A recent report of the government has shown that with the increase in
number
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 of dating sites and the number of youngsters registering them, the number of suicides is
also
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rise
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.
Therefore
, it has a major negative effect on
emotions
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 of
young
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 generation. In conclusion, with the development of
technology
,
people
 should understand the negative effect before
its
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 too late.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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