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today, majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family?

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spending
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 a long
time
 when their parents
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 work and it may affect not the
children
 behaviour only but all the
families
.
However
, some may claim that grandparents have a free
time
 staying with the
children
 and it might not affect the
condut
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conduct
 of how they behave. I personally
beleive
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believe
 that the
disavantages
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disadvantages
 outweigh the advantages. Generally, all the
families
 around the globe
tand
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and
tend
 to concentrate
in
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 their
children
 behaviour and they always try to spend
much
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time
 with them.
children
 might
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 many
problem
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problems
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 their daily life especially
,
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 when
the
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 parents in the work. One of the significant
problem
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 is
the
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knowledge which
considered
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 to be
a
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an
importnat
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important
 aspect in the future.
In other words
,
children
 who
raised
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 by their grandparents might affect the whole
families
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family
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, as they might teach or say to the
children
 something is not good for them.
For example
, some studies show the effects on the
children
 behaviour who were away from their
families
.
Moreover
, Spending
time
 with young people by
thier
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their
 family aid to enhance and teach them in
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 and increase their awareness for
many
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any
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problem
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 they might face in the future. In conclusion,
families
 play an important role when they
staying
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 with their
children
 as it will improve and enhance their skills.
Therefore
,
families
 should spend more
time
 with their siblings in order to encourage them especially in the
first
 period of their life.
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