You are due to start new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employeer. In your letter: •Explain your situation •Describe your problems •Tell him or her when you think you can start.

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Dear Mr. Johnson, I am writing to you in order to explain my current situation and request you to supply me with extra time to start my new job. As you know, I applied to your company to work as a technician and I am supposed

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working there the following week. Unfortunately, I had a fatal accident riding my motorcycle on the highway on the outskirts

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night and broke my left leg seriously. As the doctor said, it would take me about a month to recover from my injury.

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, my dearly loved granny passed away

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early morning. For these reasons, I can not go to work in the near future. I would be grateful if you could keep my position until I get better. I assure you that I will start my work as soon as I fully recuperate. I look forward to receiving a positive response from you at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Jason Brownie

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coherence cohesion

Your letter has a clear structure with a good introduction, explanation of circumstances, and a closing. To improve coherence and cohesion, consider using more linking verbs or phrases to smoothly transition between ideas.

task achievement

You have addressed all parts of the task effectively. However, to enrich your task achievement, you could add more details about your problems or potential solutions to enhance the reader's understanding of your situation.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

165 words

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