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Band 7

There is a sports stadium near your home where large number of people come to watch games each weekend. This cause you and your neighbours some problems. Write aletter to the local council . In your letter- -explain who you are and where you live -describe the problem -suggest what the local council should do

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Dear Town Council, I am excited to share my thoughts on the recent opening of the new
stadium
 in our community.
This
 facility offers a wonderful opportunity for sports events, concerts, and cultural activities that can enhance our local culture.
However
, I have a few concerns
to ensure
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about ensuring
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 the
stadium
 positively impacts our
neighborhood
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neighbourhood
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.
Firstly
, to reduce traffic congestion on event days, effective traffic control measures are essential. I propose a dedicated shuttle service connecting the
stadium
 with key public transportation hubs, encouraging attendees to use public transit
instead
 of driving.
Additionally
, clear signage will help direct vehicles, minimizing disruptions for nearby residents.
Secondly
, managing noise levels is crucial for maintaining the quality of life for those living close to the
stadium
. I recommend establishing a reasonable curfew for events, ensuring that loud activities conclude at a designated time,
allowing
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 residents to enjoy their evenings peacefully. By addressing these concerns, I believe the new
stadium
 can become a valuable asset for our community, fostering engagement
while
 respecting the needs of local residents. Thank you for considering these suggestions. I look forward to the positive changes the
stadium
 will bring to our town. Sincerely,
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task achievement
To achieve a complete response, add a brief introduction about yourself and where you live. This will provide context to the reader and address that part of the task.
task achievement
Ensure the letter directly addresses the local council, suggesting they formally implement solutions. This strengthens the sense of action required from them.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with a clear greeting and closing, which ensures smooth flow and clarity.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph effectively introduces and discusses a new idea, maintaining a logical progression throughout the letter.
task achievement
The writing maintains a formal tone suitable for a letter to a local council, while also being polite and respectful.
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