Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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zoos are helpful for living creatures raises lots of

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. A plethora of people

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to believe that all

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establishments are violent and want them to be shut up - while other individuals, as well as I, frown upon

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interesting and thought-provoking issue, commenting

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opinions. Personally,I do not consider a zoo to be a cruel place for animals. The primer reason is that beasts are used to

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wild life

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, and according to researches, in

captivity

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their

livespan

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lifespan

might be much longer.

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, scientists said that lions are living in their cages twice more compared to the

existance

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in nature. The secondary reason is that if creatures are in the zoo, there is no need for them to hunter for

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and have

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relationship.

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difference for those who eat grass as they are in

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enough.

However

, some members of society are sure that being in menageries leads to

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danger

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for animals. They underline

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limits

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are

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is,

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opportunities for beasts to have

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lifestyle. For some species, especially for birds, it is

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great importance as ,

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, they got sick and

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.

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, an eagle suffers without flying and even can pass away due to

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fact.

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causes significant stress. To sum up, despite the opposite point of view, I would like to emphasise that zoos do good for different

speicies

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species

, and the

rerest

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rarest

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ones are not an exception to be

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precise

.

This

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occurs

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soccer

because of grounds I have mentioned earlier.