Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion
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zoos are helpful for living creatures raises lots of Correct your spelling
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interesting and thought-provoking issue, commenting Correct your spelling
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both
opinions.
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on both
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living
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the wild
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wildlife
wild life
, and according to researches, in Correct your spelling
wildlife
captivity
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might be much longer. Correct your spelling
lifespan
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in nature. The secondary reason is that if creatures are in the zoo, there is no need for them to hunter for Correct your spelling
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danger
dangers
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limits
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, and the Correct your spelling
species
rerest
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