You rented a car from Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter – introduce yourself – explain the situation – say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Symond, I hope

this

email finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to share the experiences that I faced

last

week after taking a

car

rental service from your company. First and foremost, I am Mamun Khan from Dhaka and have been working in a multinational company. As a part of our office program,

last

week I rented a 7-seater

car

for a full day to travel from Dhaka to Feni.

Although

the

overall

services were excellent including the behavior of the driver and the speedy Wi-Fi connection inside the

car

. But the air conditioning system was not functional which is why it was really difficult for us to sit inside the vehicle as the outside temperature was terrible.

However

, I would like to suggest some ideas to avoid

this

kind of situation in the future.

Firstly

, the driver may check the

overall

parts of the

car

, especially the air conditioning system before

traveling

Change the spelling

travelling

show examples

anywhere.

Additionally

, you may ensure the periodical inspection of

this

car

through an expert technician. I hope you will like the above-mentioned suggestions and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Mark Russell

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Task Achievement

Ensure that the introduction clearly sets the context for the reader, and mention the main purpose of the letter in the opening paragraph.

Task Achievement

Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single point. However, it's important to provide more elaborate detail when describing the core issue to ensure complete response to the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

Use a range of cohesive devices effectively to manage the progression from one idea to the next, ensuring that the letter flows smoothly.

Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure the closing of the letter contains a clear statement of the desired outcome or action you expect from the company.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

199 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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