Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. However, some people think other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many countries
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that the
economic
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considered
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to be a cornerstone for the government.
However
, Other
people
may claim that there are other
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much important than the financial part. In my opinion, I personally believe that raising the
economy
in the country is essential to offer lots of service seeking the future life. Generally, government tend to
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a balance between the financial part and other services. Progression in the
economy
might provide services
such
as cinema, coffee, shopping mall and etc. The main reason to support
this
claim is that
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solutions for the investment. If the government
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an effort to aid poor
people
, they may enhance different
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in the city.
For example
,
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people
suffering from the decreasing of the
economy
.
However
,
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majority of
people
suffering from increasing the
economy
as it is not affordable for them to live.
In other words
, raising
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the
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prices make these
people
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lots of issues in their daily life.
For instance
,
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Egyptian
people
have
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number of them facing
difficulities
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difficulties
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in the food. In conclusion,
although
increasing poverty in many countries,
acheiving
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achieving
best
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economic
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could be
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the result
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of providing various services for the citizen.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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