Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

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Dear Sir, I’m writing to you regarding your intention to learn to drive a vehicle, which you’re trying for sometimes. Having a driving license is an important achievement of your career as it provides a sense of freedom to me, which helps you to drive around everywhere without any restriction;

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, I’m praising your attempt. The downside is that it could cost you some money. About the school, my favourite driving school is Mak driving school as it’s the most experienced tutors to teach you safe driving techniques.

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, my recommendation can assist you to avail 25% discount, which saves you some money for sure. My tips for you would be to drive carefully cause you’re going to operate a machine,which can kill people on the streets if you are not watchful.

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, the penalty of an accident is huge in my country, which could destroy your personal life. All the best! Ryan Smith

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

155 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Driving licence
Public transportation
Independence
Daily commutes
Emergency transportation
Self-reliance
Structured learning environment
Professional driving instructors
Advanced driving techniques
Safety awareness
Flexible timings
Weather conditions
Basic vehicle maintenance
Traffic signs
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