Some people think that environment problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

in recent decades,environmental
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have become a disaster for
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world.in that
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human beings live is in danger in
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way.some individuals argue that that matter should be solved
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scale .while some commentators believe that each nation should find out their own solution.
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,as we shall see now. on the one hand,some environmental problems are discovered as
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global one which means nations can not solve it by themselves because it depends on the various elements
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ozone
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ozone
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earth
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from
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s dangerous components which are impact on human s skin and bring lots of
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diseased
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s skins are contagious. so it is a
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for humans.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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