Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some
people
reckon that the increase of fat children
is related to the government
's responsibility. From my point of view, I strongly disagree about this
opinion.
To begin
with, there are many reasons why kids can get fat such
as eating fast food
in restaurants
, eating more than what their body needs or doing less exercise which is all related to activities at home. Thus
, parents
or family members could probably have more responsibilities for the rise in obesity in children
. First
of all, parents
are someone who should control the consumption of food
in their children
every meal. For example
, children
may be encouraged to eat more in their daily meals because their parents
hope their kids to grow up quickly and be healthy. In addition
, there are some parents
who tend to praise their kids by giving them candies or their favourite dishes which let them eat more and become bigger. Secondly
, other parents
are likely to be workaholics and then
they do have much time for cooking. As a result
, they may often take their sons and daughters to fast-foodrestaurant
which could make them overweight quickly and easily.
Correct your spelling
food restaurant
food restaurants
On the other hand
, the government
might have several solutions to deal with this
problem namely decreasing fast food
restaurants
, encouraging everyone to play sports but they might not bring good results for many reasons. To begin
with, although
the government
can decrease the number of restaurants
and make people
eat out less, they are not able to control what people
eat every day. Therefore
, children
can eat a lot of things in their house or school if their parents
allow. To illustrate this
, children
can be healthier when they rarely eat fast food
in restaurants
, however
, if they eat healthy food
but with a big amount at home, they are still fatter. Secondly
, the government
could encourage people
to do exercise by showing videos on TV but if children
do not like to do it by themselves, they would not get lean.
To sum up, being overweight in children
could be a big problem nowadays, however
, it would not be the responsibility of the government
but each family as well as each child.Submitted by truongtuyetnhung2019 on
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