Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some
people
reckon that the increase of fat
children
is related to the
government
's responsibility. From my point of view, I strongly disagree about
this
opinion.
To begin
with, there are many reasons why kids can get fat
such
as eating fast
food
in
restaurants
, eating more than what their body needs or doing less exercise which is all related to activities at home.
Thus
,
parents
or family members could probably have more responsibilities for the rise in obesity in
children
.
First
of all,
parents
are someone who should control the consumption of
food
in their
children
every meal.
For example
,
children
may be encouraged to eat more in their daily meals because their
parents
hope their kids to grow up quickly and be healthy.
In addition
, there are some
parents
who tend to praise their kids by giving them candies or their favourite dishes which let them eat more and become bigger.
Secondly
, other
parents
are likely to be workaholics and
then
they do have much time for cooking.
As a result
, they may often take their sons and daughters to fast-
foodrestaurant
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food restaurant
food restaurants
which could make them overweight quickly and easily.
On the other hand
, the
government
might have several solutions to deal with
this
problem namely decreasing fast
food
restaurants
, encouraging everyone to play sports but they might not bring good results for many reasons.
To begin
with,
although
the
government
can decrease the number of
restaurants
and make
people
eat out less, they are not able to control what
people
eat every day.
Therefore
,
children
can eat a lot of things in their house or school if their
parents
allow. To illustrate
this
,
children
can be healthier when they rarely eat fast
food
in
restaurants
,
however
, if they eat healthy
food
but with a big amount at home, they are still fatter.
Secondly
, the
government
could encourage
people
to do exercise by showing videos on TV but if
children
do not like to do it by themselves, they would not get lean. To sum up, being overweight in
children
could be a big problem nowadays,
however
, it would not be the responsibility of the
government
but each family as well as each child.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • policies
  • responsibility
  • health and well-being
  • education and awareness programs
  • childhood obesity
  • food advertising and labeling
  • unhealthy food
  • supportive environments
  • recreational facilities
  • collaboration
  • healthcare providers
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