Some people think that travelling abroad is necessary while others believe it's not because TV and the Internet can give people the same information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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have different opinions about travelling to other countries. Some groups of

people

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believe that it is necessary to travel abroad,

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another group do not agree with it, as

people

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get

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types of data from different resources

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as TV,

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the Internet

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and so on.

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it is possible to access to the various parts of the world via

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and networks.

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,

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consider that it is not an alternative to travelling. There are various reasons why many

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prefer to travel

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foreign countries. First of all, I think that we get more pleasure when we are visiting abroad and it is incomparable to get

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from electronic

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.

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, these

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are limiting

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the vision of view,

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if you want to get detailed

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about any country,

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as local

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, meals, climate, customs and traditions, but you can not taste it or it is impossible to observe these

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or their customs.

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, I believe that long journeys are not only appropriate for obtaining

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about somewhere but

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meant to be amusing events, different tours, new friendships,

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and new

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tastes.

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, there are justified reasons for themself who support travelling abroad is unimportant. Primarily, they

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this

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idea that all

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is accessible with

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apply

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electronic

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.

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, there is the main issue is that

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trips to another country

is

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very costly and there are difficulties

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as

to get

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getting

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a visa,

to book

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booking

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a ticket, to

reserve

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a hotel room

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there is no additional cost for getting data from TV or Internet. In conclusion,

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, it might seem achievable for everyone

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use virtual

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for travelling,

but

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I personally prefer visiting abroad

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with

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the intention

to gain

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of gaining

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real pleasure.