Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree?
Some
people
argue that internet
usage in social media
made an unhealthy effect on people
personality
and Fix the agreement mistake
personalities
relation
with others. Facebook may help humans to connect with friends from around Fix the agreement mistake
relations
thw
world, but Correct your spelling
the
in
the dark Change preposition
on
side
it causes Add a comma
,side
internet
crime without a wise utilization. I agree with that statement however
, this
essay will discuss both points of view followed by reasons and examples.
On the one hand, virtual
world contains a lot of helpful ways for Add an article
the virtual
people
socializing
with others even if they live separately. Change the verb form
to socialize
For example
, it very
useful when young adults pursue an education outside their hometown and suddenly feel homesick, Add a missing verb
is very
facebook
respectively, makes them be able to overcome that feeling. It Change the capitalization
Facebook
also
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is also
use
for long-distance Wrong verb form
used
couple
in helping them communicate with Fix the agreement mistake
couples
other
. Imagine in the past couples correspond by letter and it takes a long time before the letter Correct pronoun usage
others
recieved
. Correct your spelling
received
Consequently
, facebook
provide easier life Change the capitalization
Facebook
to
humans nowadays to correspond with Change preposition
for
other
rapidly and easily.
Correct pronoun usage
others
On the other hand
, social media
causes a
serious effects Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
in
the criminal based on Change preposition
on
internet
if the utilization is uncontrol. Kidnapping, murder, robbing, Add an article
the internet
child-abuse
,sexual Correct your spelling
child abuse
harrasment
are Correct your spelling
harassment
the
examples of the danger of the virtual world. It is because social networking can be an effective modus for Correct article usage
apply
the
criminal to attract their victims.Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, it may affect human ability to socialize in person, since they are regularly chatting with virtual people
, the needs
to communicate with Fix the agreement mistake
need
people
in person is considered to be unnecessary.Yet, the vicious impacts of the
social Correct article usage
apply
media
are often unseen by people
nowadays.
To sum up, although
social media
do help people
from all places to communicate easily, it contains many negative impacts to its users, because the utilization is often lead to internet based
crime or antisocial behaviour in real life. Add a hyphen
internet-based
The wise
usage is mandatory nowadays and for the future, to avoid Correct article usage
Wise
people
from those dark impacts of social media
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