Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of an international organization rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree
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countries
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can not protect the whole world. Actually, they already doing it. Because, all presidents of Use synonyms
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, they all doing it by themselves. Linking Words
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, India has environmental issues. The main of Linking Words
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issue will be the responsibility of the international Linking Words
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government
to the international organizations.
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countries
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countries
are not the same. Use synonyms
For example
, the Japanese like to eat insects. Linking Words
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countries
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as Russia can not represent it. And there are a lot of other traditions. A simple example is Kazakh Linking Words
people
burn the grass to protect themselves from wolves. And there is any possibility of having restrictions for Use synonyms
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who like eating meat.
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clarity
Clarify your arguments further. Some points, such as the issue of environmental cleanliness with respect to India's population and the Kazakh tradition of burning grass, need more explanation to make their relevance clear.
cohesion
Improve the logical flow between sentences and paragraphs. Ensure that each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next, by using cohesive devices like furthermore, in addition, however, etc.
examples
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unique points
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