The best way to solve world's environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, the transportation system has been blamed to be the main factor causing

en

vironment

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pollution

. To solve

this

problem, some people suggested increasing the

price

of

fuels

. In my opinion,

this

measure is ineffective to tackle th

e

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en

vironment

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pollution

and there are more suitable solutions to

this

problem

Firstly

, increasing the cost of

fuels

can’t

decrease

the usage of

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t.

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The world’s transport system depends heavily on fossil

fuels

to run, so a higher

price

for diesel oil and gas won’t

decrease

the need of

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t. The toxic chemicals emission will remain the same, and the

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ituation won’t get any better.

For example

, our government has increased the

price

of oil and gas significantly over the

last

decade, but because of the popularity of private vehicles in our country, the sales of these two types of energy has not

de

crease.

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When it comes to ta

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h

e

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en

vironment

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pollution

, there are more practical solutions than increasing the

price

of

fuels

.

Firstly

, we can shift our use of fossil

fuels

to a more eco-friendly alternative. Electric and su

n-energy a

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re two possible so

urce o

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sources

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f energy that can replace oil and gas. They are more sustainable, less expensive and don’t harm th

e na

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ture. If these sources of energy get more popular, it can have a positive effect on tackling th

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en

vironment

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pollution

.

Secondly

, citizens should use more public transportation to reduce the chemicals emission from cars.

This

measure will significantly

decrease

the amount of carbon dioxide in the air, leaving a fresher atmosphere for people. In conclusion, increasing the

price

of

fuels

isn’t a suitable solution to the current

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vironment

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pollution

situation.

Instead

, th

e u

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they

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se of eco-friendly

fuels

and a better public transportation system ar

e se

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em t

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o be more effective solutions