Water is a valuable finite resource. Governments all over the world should control how much water their citizens use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Aware of the precious
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resources on earth
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become increasingly scarce, many people suggest that the government should have control over people’s
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consumption.
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, I completely disagree with
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suggestion. Many believe that controlling how much
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citizens are allowed to use can result in
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valuable element being used less wastefully and alleviate the worldwide
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crisis, but I highly doubt
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policy’s practicality. Admittedly, when
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is put under stricter government control, citizens would more likely consume
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more economically, and inhabitants in deprived regions could have more
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available for their daily needs.
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, the contributing factor to today’s shortages of drinkable
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more likely lies in ecologically irresponsible factories whose annual waste disposal is, in fact, much greater than that from households.
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,
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policy, which fails to address the root of the issue, can hardly bring about any practical outcomes for
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scarcity nowadays. On top of that,
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-controlling decision is hard to carry out and even can be seen as a waste of national resources. People’s demand for
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differs greatly as to many aspects
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as their occupation, age bracket or health status. Athletes tend to require more
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than those whose job is less arduous, and
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, most patients are
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in greater need of
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for quicker recovery, so measuring the amount of
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each citizen needs is nearly impossible. It would
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be inconvenient for a person to have to ask permission from the local authorities for his or her increased fluid intake. As for the government, there has to be more public money paid for officials in charge of checking whether or not one has exceeded their
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allocation before granting approval for their extra
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request. In conclusion, controlling everybody’s
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use may only be a theoretically effective solution. To practically deal with
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issue, what should be prioritized is aiming at its underlying cause, which is enhancing public awareness in the
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place.
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