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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

#countries #people #bout #history #house #research
In
this
 contemporary era where
people
 are busy with their chore activities, It has been seen that a section of society is keen to look at the root's of their
place
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for instance
 it might be their building in which they stay or even can be about the
house
 in which they live.
To begin
 with, Every country has many stories and a rich history to offer, but it all depends on an individual to what extend
one
 is curious to know about it. When it comes to knowing about your own resident it gives
a
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 unknown pleasure, and its activity is usually carried by the family members who stay away from their
mother land
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motherland
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. These
people
 are intrestented to know about the
place
 the cultural area and the heritage about the
house
 they reside in because it gives them a sense of
acheivement
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achievement
 as they come closer and get attached to their native land.
One
 of my
friend
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friends
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 who stays abroad, when came to visit the village he made a documentary film on the
house
 which they owned, as it was
one
 of the ancient houses.
However
,
one
 can conduct
this
 activity by using many sources
such
 as having
conversation
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 with elderly
people
 of the locality,
More over
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Moreover
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 It is
also
 possible to start with own family, like to go through the old photographs of any special occasions. To know about the locality and the
house
people
 can ask the neighbours, who might know about that
place
 in much detail. Especially
every
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 village or
house
 there are many workers as
in
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apply
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, security guards who
has
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have
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 served for a decade or so, or
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maybe
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may be
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maybe
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house maids
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housemaids
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 they can
also
 embark on many
such
 incidents or some special moments
what
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that
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 they still remember. Information from the Government servants is
also
 a possible way
such
 as a
police man
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policeman
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 or a
fire fighter
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firefighter
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 can
also
 contribute to collect some data of the
place
. To put it in a nutshell, It is always better to know about the
place
 where my reside as well as ,
one
 should
also
 have sufficient knowledge about the
house
 or building they live in because it not only increases our knowledge but ,It
also
 creates an unknown bond with the
place
.
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