Some people believe that women should be able to join their country’s army and police forces. Others think that only men should be allowed to work in these areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to some,

women

have to serve alongside

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men in an

army

and to work in

police

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, because all of them are equal citizens of their country and should give back their duty. Whereas others think that

women

are too delicate and weak, and the government should not put them in

a

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such

danger. Personally, I think that both genders should have the opportunity to join an

army

,

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because it is fair. To start with, those who are against

women

working in dangerous areas often say that

female’s

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mentality is unstable, and they are emotional. In a sudden stressful situation,

women

will not think straight and may act

illogical

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.

Moreover

,

police

and

army

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may hurt

women

’s reproductive health due to

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physical and psychological loads during service.

For example

, according to the results of the research of the Moscow

Police

Academy held in 2018, 40% of

women

has

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to

the

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external irritants more unexpected than men’s one.

Furthermore

, around 30% of policewomen do not want to have a child after seeing cruelty in the sphere of criminality.

However

, in some countries,

such

as Israel,

women

have been an integral part of an

army

, as well as

police

structures for a lot of years already. The government is sure, that males and females are equally obligated to help and to protect their motherland from enemies.

For instance

, based on Israeli

women

’s words, serving in an

army

is an

honor

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.

Besides

, retired citizens may count on getting a prestigious job. There are some

females

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squad

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squads

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in the Russian forces as well. During the annual parade on May 9, they are given special attention and

being

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highly

honored

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. In conclusion, I believe that joining an

army

should be possible for everyone, who are ready to serve. Despite some arguments and limitations, more and more countries accept females in

such

important spheres.