Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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word used  important) to accept some negative

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( when occurring = when they occur) whereas others argue that it is better to try to seek some solutions to deal with hard times in life. I will discuss both views in the essay below. On the one hand, there are several reasons supporting why

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believe that we have to accept the bad conditions.

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of all,

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can not avoid all of

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events ( “the bad events) which happen around us and make us feel exhausted and depressed. Accepting a bad situation make

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realize and acknowledge their mistakes.

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, failures in business are opportunities for the leaders to know which strategies are comfortable for the company or acknowledge the defects in leading a company and improve them in the future. If we are accepting our circumstances,

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can allow us to maintain a positive mood and to continue enjoying our life despite some difficulties.

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, other ( others) argue that we should have a good attitude and find ways to solve

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the problem

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(problems) of bad

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of accepting them. When struggling with negative events, it gives us motivation ( the motivation) to face with (no preposition here) and find solutions. In

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way, we optimistically challenge ourselves and have a great impact on our life.

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, when we strive and seek solutions, we could

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broaden our limits and widen our horizons related to opportunities for bad

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.

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, if we lose our job, we will focus on finding a new job not only to solve the problem of being unemployed but

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to improve the quality of living standard. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have benefits.

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, it seems to me that we had better try to deal with problems and enhance the

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instead

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of accepting them