Some people believe that living in an apartment instead of a university dormitory has many advantages while others say that it has many disadvantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in an apartment instead of a university dormitory.

After getting a high score to join a

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that

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prefer, they have to decide to live in an

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or

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dormitory

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, and

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choice affects their academic performance and student life. While most

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enjoy living in an

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some

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prefer living at a

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dormitory

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to an

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essay shows the advantages and

disadvantages

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of living in an

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or at a

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dormitory

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, when you live in an

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, you have free time to spend on your work, and privacy is one of them. While the

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in the

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have little privacy, someone who lives in an

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enjoys freedom privacy.The student living in apartments can decide the

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or paint the room in their thinking.

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, you can paint or decorate your room in your mind, but in the

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, you can not, because you have to prepare your room cleanly and smell goods. That meant living in an

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bring

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you a silent atmosphere to learn

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that the several

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of living in an

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rather than living in a

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have some visible

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.

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is the money, the cost to rent an

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in the middle of a city is very expensive. Renting an

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in my city is very difficult for

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.

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, that half of the

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who learn at

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usually come from the countryside.

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that the

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who come from

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have little money and they have to work part-time In conclusion that living in an

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or

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has two

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and advantages. But living in a

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is more comfortable than it

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because it can help save money and time to go to school