Some people believe that living in an apartment instead of a university dormitory has many advantages while others say that it has many disadvantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in an apartment instead of a university dormitory.

After getting a high score to join a

university

that

students

prefer, they have to decide to live in an

apartment

or

university

dormitory

, and

this

choice affects their academic performance and student life. While most

students

enjoy living in an

apartment

then

some

students

prefer living at a

university

dormitory

to an

apartment

.

This

essay shows the advantages and

disadvantages

of living in an

apartment

or at a

university

dormitory

First

, when you live in an

apartment

, you have free time to spend on your work, and privacy is one of them. While the

students

in the

dormitory

have little privacy, someone who lives in an

apartment

enjoys freedom privacy.The student living in apartments can decide the

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or paint the room in their thinking.

For example

, you can paint or decorate your room in your mind, but in the

dormitory

, you can not, because you have to prepare your room cleanly and smell goods. That meant living in an

apartment

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you a silent atmosphere to learn

On the other hand

that the several

disadvantages

of living in an

apartment

rather than living in a

dormitory

have some visible

disadvantages

.

First

is the money, the cost to rent an

apartment

in the middle of a city is very expensive. Renting an

apartment

in my city is very difficult for

students

.

For example

, that half of the

students

who learn at

university

usually come from the countryside.

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that the

students

who come from

country

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have little money and they have to work part-time In conclusion that living in an

apartment

or

dormitory

has two

disadvantages

and advantages. But living in a

dormitory

is more comfortable than it

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because it can help save money and time to go to school