You work at home and have a problem with a piece of quipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work -say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Mr John, I am writing you concerning a problem I noticed on my newly acquired

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from your company. Recently, I noticed that the battery doesn't charge well enough to the maximum percentage, meaning that if I have to unplug and work, the

laptop

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will shut down sooner than expected. Actually, I would have not bothered you with

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issue.

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, it is obstructing my work, because once I disconnect from a power source, the

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will shut down and I will automatically lose all my unsaved work, and that to me is devastating.

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, I would kindly request you to send your technical support to my office in order to have a look at it and profer a solution to

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anomaly. If we have to do any replacement of any parts, I believe your company will handle that because the

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is under warranty.

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, I will be waiting for your company staff to come around for the pick-up, do have a wonderful day ahead of you. Yours sincerely, Rotimi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

173 words

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