Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believed that all students have to study useful subjects
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crucial for their
future
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.
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consider that people should focus on student's ability and their love more than their
future
position in society. I will discuss both views in
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To begin
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a parent
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parents
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who
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find out
their children's personal
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fulfilment
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to help them in a way to reach their intentions Will have more successful students in
future
,
for instance
, when someone is attracted to art it is illogical to be a successful physician . Everybody has it's own
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aptitude
attitude
and curiosity so it is impossible to expect all
humens
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humans
have to study in
specefic
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specific
area whereas, all people have a variety of needs in society
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example, work
resourses
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resources
are needed in all aspects.
On the other hand
, parents who always thinking about their children's Job-status and prestige do not
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about their capacities ,passions and talents.
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consider that it is predictable that they are
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about their
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economical status and budget. It is totally true that in some countries
such
as Iran , the rate of redundancy or
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unemployment
among graduation of engineering is higher than medical counterparts.
Moreover
, the mean salary proportion which is mentioned through social media’s for medical graduates is higher rather than artists , engineers and so on but their economical-status is not a success
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not follow his/her passions cannot have a successful life , by choosing
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specific
subjects you can study high prestige majors but it never leads to
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or success.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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