Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

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online is available since that many

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Topic Vocabulary:

Distance learning
Flexible schedule
Virtual classroom
Digital resources
E-learning platforms
Asynchronous learning
Synchronous learning
Cost-effective
Self-paced study
Technical difficulties
Blended learning
Online modules
Remote access
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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

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