Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

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day and age,
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studying
university
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classes
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online is available since that many
collegies
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colleges
college
strat
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start
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to share
class
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on
internet
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. I take the view that
this
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To begin
with, some people didn'
t
complete their undergraduate degree because they
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couldn't
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attend
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university
.
For example
, women who
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got married
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small age, and they have children
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couldn't
t
leave
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their
there
children for a long time with someone
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especially
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the
university
class
each day take
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minimum
minmam
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a minmam
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5
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of 5
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hours.
Hence
, the online classes give those women the
opportunites
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opportunity
to attend from
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their
houses when they don'
t
need to leave
thier
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their
children.
Moreover
, the area in
university
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building
is limited.
Although
some
collegies
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colleges
are big and the classes can
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more than 200
student
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students
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generally,
this
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considered
as limited area
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compared
compare
to the number of
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students
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that
want
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to study at
university
especially in huge towns with few
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.
As a result
of that, some
student
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students
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cannot take
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a class
the class
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class
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classes
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.
Therefore
, the chance to study in college will increase due to
this
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improvement
which
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as
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an advantage.
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Furthermore
, studying online is
esaier
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easier
than
taking
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talking
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face to face classes because the
student
dont
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don't
need to go to
university
, buy
srudy
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study
sturdy
tools or clothes, wake up early.
This
can be a factor in
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encouraging
more
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students
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to attend
the
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college.
As a result
of that, the
educaton
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education
level will improve. In
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conclusion
, even though not all
collegies
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colleges
college
provied
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provided
provide
this
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surveys
, it is a good thing too unable the students learn via the internet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distance learning
  • Flexible schedule
  • Virtual classroom
  • Digital resources
  • E-learning platforms
  • Asynchronous learning
  • Synchronous learning
  • Cost-effective
  • Self-paced study
  • Technical difficulties
  • Blended learning
  • Online modules
  • Remote access
  • Student engagement
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