Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this can have a negative impact on local culture. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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portion was approximately 12 per cent, for women. On the

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and admit that the

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, every animal has its particular

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the others negatively.

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plants

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animals

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lives too.

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and trees destroy animals habitat

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risk of extinction.

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, there are much more important environmental problems. The

first

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is the overusing of fossil fuels, which affect the other environmental problems too.

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not only

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the greenhouse gasses

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but

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will not remain any natural resources for the

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plastic uses increase every day, and if it is not addressed it will harm the environment more than any problem.

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pollution is even harmful to the in danger

species

that some environmentalists are more worried about. In conclusion, I admit the

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species

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and should be paid attention

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however

, I strongly believe there are more important environmental issues that should be tackled immediately. There are two opposite views regarding the importance of losing some especial Flonase and floras, as an environmental issue. While some consider

this

as the most essential problem, others believe there are more critical problems. I believe the

second

group has more reasonable arguments. On the

one

hand, I understand the concerns of the

first

group and admit that the death of

species

has some drawbacks for the environment.

First

, every animal has its particular

role

in the food chain, so the absence of everyone could impact others negatively.

In addition

,

plants

play a significant

role

in animal lives too.

For instance

, the

loss

of

plants

and trees destroy animals habitat and even put them at risk of extinction.