Some governments spend a lot of public money training individuals to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

STATEMENT OF PURPOSE INTRODUCTION I, [Bardia & Faridi], was born on 1 August 1998, and I am currently residing in Shiraz. I

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studied Mathematics & Physics and I

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worked as a mobile phone repair technician. EDUCATIONAL BACKGROUND I

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high

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school

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diploma in Mathematics

& Physics

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and physics

in 2015-16 at Shiraz

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university high

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with a GPA of 15.68

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20. ENGLISH PROFICIENCY LEVEL From middle

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until now, I started learning English and

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the IELTS exam that I took in February

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year my score is as follows:

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7, Reading 7.5, Writing 6.5, Speaking 6.5,

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7 WORKING AFTER GRADUATION After completing a diploma degree, with the introduction of

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of my professors, I started my internship at Atlas mobile to gain practical experience. After 8 months

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my performance in the assigned tasks, the manager decided to hire me. During

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time, I was able to apply the concepts I learned during my studies in a real business and improve my experience and expertise. WHY

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ENGINEERING My interest in Technology started before completing High

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. I was always interested in programming and designing simple games with

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.

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my

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is a developing

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and needs to upgrade its cybersecurity systems.

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, there is a lot of potential for growth in

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field of work. So, I decided to

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Engineering to gain the ability to analyze the security of systems, plan for optimal designing using limited resources and how to treat human resources and manage them properly.

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in today’s ,

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it is essential to prepare companies for cyber attacks. WHY ITALY Italy is

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of the best countries in Europe with high

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educational system and most of the Italian universities are in the top 500 universities

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the

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rankings.

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, Italy is a good destination for those who limited money

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and resources

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.

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to the above Italy has a lot of cultural similarities with my

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and as a

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I will feel less distant from my

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. WHY

POLYTECHNIC

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UNIVERSITY

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TURIN

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I have chosen the

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University

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of

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to Continue my

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because the

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Engineering Department has many years of experience in

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and research.

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university

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is

one

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of the best in the

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, its professors have worked in various

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in the industry and very famous businessmen

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graduated from

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as John Elkann.

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to the above

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of the highest employment rates after graduation and every year, a large number of its graduates are joined to big companies in the

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. I am eager to join

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program and I hope I can learn from the challenging environment of the

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University

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of

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and make the most of the opportunity.

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of my favourite things to do is

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football and I’m a big fan of the Juventus club so it motivates me more to come to the beautiful city of

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. CONCLUSION

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the information stated above my firm decision is to

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for a bachelor of

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University

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of

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to achieve my goals.

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opportunity

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me to my dream job. [Bardia & Faridi]