Some governments spend a lot of public money training individuals to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE INTRODUCTION I, [Bardia & Faridi], was born on 1 August 1998, and I am currently residing in Shiraz. I
had
studied Mathematics & Physics and I Unnecessary verb
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have
worked as a mobile phone repair technician. EDUCATIONAL BACKGROUND I Unnecessary verb
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have done
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completed
high
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a high
school
diploma in Mathematics & Physics
in 2015-16 at Shiraz Correct your spelling
and physics
university high
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University High School
school
with a GPA of 15.68 of
20. ENGLISH PROFICIENCY LEVEL From middle Change preposition
out of
school
until now, I started learning English and according to
the IELTS exam that I took in February last
year my score is as follows: Listening
7, Reading 7.5, Writing 6.5, Speaking 6.5, Verb problem
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Overall
7 WORKING AFTER GRADUATION After completing a diploma degree, with the introduction of one
of my professors, I started my internship at Atlas mobile to gain practical experience. After 8 months due to
my performance in the assigned tasks, the manager decided to hire me. During this
time, I was able to apply the concepts I learned during my studies in a real business and improve my experience and expertise. WHY COMPUTER
ENGINEERING My interest in Technology started before completing High School
. I was always interested in programming and designing simple games with python
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Python
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C++
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my Add a comma
Currently,
country
is a developing country
and needs to upgrade its cybersecurity systems. Therefore
, there is a lot of potential for growth in this
field of work. So, I decided to study
Computer
Engineering to gain the ability to analyze the security of systems, plan for optimal designing using limited resources and how to treat human resources and manage them properly. Also
in today’s ,world
it is essential to prepare companies for cyber attacks. WHY ITALY Italy is Add a comma
world,
one
of the best countries in Europe with high quality
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high-quality
of
educational system and most of the Italian universities are in the top 500 universities Change preposition
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of
the Change preposition
in
world
rankings. Also
, Italy is a good destination for those who limited money resources
Because of the cost of living and Correct word choice
and resources
study
. In addition
to the above Italy has a lot of cultural similarities with my country
and as a student
I will feel less distant from my Add a comma
student,
country
. WHY POLYTECHNIC
UNIVERSITY
OF TURIN
I have chosen the Polytechnic
University
of Turin
to Continue my educations
because the Fix the agreement mistake
education
Computer
Engineering Department has many years of experience in teach
and research. Change the verb form
teaching
This
university
is one
of the best in the world
also
, its professors have worked in various field
in the industry and very famous businessmen Fix the agreement mistake
fields
are
graduated from Verb problem
have
Polytechnic
such
as John Elkann. In addition
to the above Polytechnic
has one
of the highest employment rates after graduation and every year, a large number of its graduates are joined to big companies in the world
. I am eager to join this
program and I hope I can learn from the challenging environment of the Polytechnic
University
of Turin
and make the most of the opportunity. One
of my favourite things to do is playing
football and I’m a big fan of the Juventus club so it motivates me more to come to the beautiful city of Wrong verb form
play
Turin
. CONCLUSION According to
the information stated above my firm decision is to study
for a bachelor of Computer
Engineering at the Polytechnic
University
of Turin
to achieve my goals. And
I believe that Correct word choice
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opportunity leads
me to my dream job. [Bardia & Faridi]Wrong verb form
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion