The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
The
tow
map below Correct your spelling
two
illustrate
Change the verb form
illustrates
Correct article usage
the road
road
interring to the Fix the agreement mistake
roads
city
hospital in seven years of period
time Add an article
the period
of
2007 and 2010. Over the period, the Change preposition
between
area
witnessed dramatic changes in roads, parking lots, bus
stop Correct word choice
and bus
area
.
In the past, there were Fix the agreement mistake
areas
tow
main roads in the Correct your spelling
two
center
, Change the spelling
centre
City
Correct article usage
the City
road
crossed by hospital
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the hospital
road
. In the New map, tow
of roundabout
has been Add an article
the roundabout
add
in the same Change the verb form
adding
added
area
.In 2007, there was a car park to
staff and Change preposition
for
public
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the public
in
the Change preposition
on
west
side to
Change preposition
of
hospital
Correct article usage
the hospital
road
in one
location. But now, there are tow
parking spots, Correct your spelling
two
one
for the staff biased the hospital road
from the west
and the city
road
from the north, and the other one
for public
in the east facing the Add an article
the public
city
hospital from west
. Add an article
the west
Further
, the bus stop area
from 2007 has been made bigger by 2010 in
Change preposition
on
west
side from Correct article usage
the west
hospital
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the hospital
road
at
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on
one
side only.
Can we sum up by saying: overall
, the the
Remove the redundancy
apply
city
hospital has clearly become more civilized than it was ever before.
Change the punctuation
?
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