one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

Owing to the fact that improvement in medical treatment for the people resulting that public can expect good and long age. In my opinion, the main
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is it helps in eradicating the diseases among the big population as well as can live a
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life
.
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with, a big decline of the major illness like cancer,typhoid, tumour etc. across
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public due to excellent medical care provided by the government.When there would be
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chances of illness,so expenses on body treatment, medicines and lab
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could
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and anyone can utilize that money on
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,family tours,education of children.
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,
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of
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life
expectancy might be 90-95 years.
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, there are more disadvantages as healthcare is a vital point for each country. Basic
amenties
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to people
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so that they would be able to enjoy
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life
. To conclude, it is very
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to spend money on
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system to make
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easy and smooth.
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development may enrich the National income and GDP of
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • health care systems
  • pension funds
  • extended family relationships
  • quality of life
  • aging population
  • economic growth
  • volunteer work
  • expertise
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  • retirement
  • age-related diseases
  • medical research
  • healthier lifestyles
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