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Nowadays people are trying to have a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems could this create? How can people overcome them? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your personal knowledge or experience.

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In
this
 modern era, the populace wants their professional
life
 and family living should be successive.
As a result
, many of them are facing issues related to
health
 and mental. To overcome
this
 situation they have to spare some fixed
time
 for their physical activities like games and yoga. in
this
 essay, I will elaborate more on these. In
this
 competitive world, people are not in a position to compromise on anything related to their living standards and the happiness of the family. To achieve
this
, they are working long hours to fulfil their dreams of career growth and the remaining
time
 they spent with the family which is one of the main reasons to not concentrate on their
health
. As an outcome of
this
, they suffer from physical illnesses like cardiac arrest, cancer, kidney failure which can go to death .
Moreover
, they face mental issues which leads to mental disturbance in their
life
.
For example
, a recent survey of "Times of India" shows that 40% of the IT employees are suffering from a lack of mental stability. To cope with
this
, the populace has to change their lifestyle by allocating fixed
time
 for their outdoor activities likely jogging, running, exercising to improve their physical strengths.
Furthermore
, they have to participate in learning meditation and follow the same on daily basis to overcome the mental issues.
For instance
, I spare one hour daily to perform yoga which keeps me mentally fit throughout the day. In conclusion, there is no harm in wanting their career success and at the same
time
 living a good family
life
. But, to achieve
this
 they can't sacrifice their
health
 which keeps the future in a big question mark. At large, at the end of the
day
Add a comma
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 all have to be long
life
 with good
health
 and wealth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Balancing
  • Burnout
  • Juggling responsibilities
  • Neglecting
  • Unrealistic expectations
  • Dissatisfaction
  • Setting realistic goals
  • Priorities
  • Fulfillment
  • Effective time management
  • Allocation
  • Reducing stress
  • Seeking support
  • Coping mechanisms
  • Balanced life
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