The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local are is not working properly. This is causing problems you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter •Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly •Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours •Suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Shweta Bhat, living near the Fairway Station, Waterloo. I am writing

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letter about the

garbage

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collection system as it is not working properly in our area.

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, I want to address the main issue which we are facing is that they do not have a

fix

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day for collecting the

garbage

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in our area.

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, when

garbage

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collecters

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collectors

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come to collect the

garbage

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they spill most of the unwanted things here and there which we have to clean afterwards. On

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apply

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behauf

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behalf

of everyone, I want to say we are really upset and disappointed by the collection system as we see chips packets and plastics everywhere in our neighbourhood. Since

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there is no regular day or date for collecting the

garbage

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, the organic waste smells

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it becomes very

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difficult

for everyone to handle. As per my suggestion, I want you to talk to the department and fix a day for us to collect the waste. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Shweta Bhat.

Submitted by bhat.shweta17 on Thu Jan 02 2025

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Consider providing more specific suggestions for improving the garbage collection system, such as proposing a fixed time or additional resources.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph has a single, clear idea to enhance clarity and understanding. This will help in maintaining a logical flow throughout the letter.

task achievement

You've clearly addressed the problem with the garbage collection system and how it affects the neighborhood.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are polite and appropriate for a formal letter.

task achievement

You maintained a suitable tone throughout the letter, balancing both politeness and assertiveness.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

177 words

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