In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Vehicles in the future can be driverless and the only crowd travelling inside will be passengers.Does
this
really overlook disadvantages over advantages?
This
discussion will be explained in the forthcoming paragraphs. To embark on driverless vehicles is not totally new to the world as it already exists currently in many countries
for instance
Dubai has metros without human drivers and it's a successful project . Advantages of
such
a cutting edge technology are that the chances of error are minimal
Moreover
, It can be controlled from a central system which makes it more economical when compared with paying salaries to an individual driver. Modern technology not only helps us on error-free routes but
also
shoulders with fewer chances of accidents .
However
, because of the algorithm used combining the distance , weather forecast as well as traffic all these will result
in accurate
Correct your spelling
inaccurate
show examples
timing. Folks don't need to wait for the
bus
or a train which run driverless because the programme will feature the accurate estimated time of arrival at a particular destination. On the one hand, where there are merits it
also
accompanies some demerits which cannot be overlooked.
Firstly
, without humans in the public transport sector will lead to a drastic loss of jobs in major countries
for example
in India railways when artificial intelligence will be replaced by humans lots of families will be affected due to modern automation.,
Secondly
Add a comma
,Secondly
show examples
machines don't have emotions they are programmed according to our requirements. There can be an emergency in a
bus
and a passenger needs to be taken to a hospital but there is no way to communicate in order to take the
bus
near the hospital.
This
may lead to unexpected disasters on the
bus
. To conclude
this
discussion, In my ,opinion disadvantages cannot be outweighed by the advantages as discussed above in the body paragraphs.
Submitted by koushvenkat on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: