Some psychologists recommend that to overcome stress in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time. Do you agree or disagree?

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constant working pattern leads to stress and anxiety for people. Some psychologists now

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of following your regular schedule. It will make you more active and life can become more

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is actually contributing to more stress which we do take back home and it affects our personal life without realizing.

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coordination, poor motor skills and so on. To sum up,in order to improve overall mental health, we should focus on devoting some

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in a day where we either do something we enjoy, clear our train of thoughts or simply do nothing. In

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we will surely see stress reduction and improved focus which actually increases our productivity and helps us be more successful.

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Some psychologists recommend that to overcome stress in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time. Do you agree or disagree?

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