Some psychologists recommend that to overcome stress in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time. Do you agree or disagree?
In
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today's
today
todays
fast pacing world, everybody is constantly moving Change to a genitive case
today's
trying
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task
to another or even trying to do multi
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tasks
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constant working pattern leads to stress and anxiety for people. Some psychologists now seuugest
to devote some Correct your spelling
suggest
time
in a day when you do nothing. While some people disagree with this
because they think this
way they can never finish their work. But I strongly agree with this
notion. The
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To begin
with, when we continously
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continuously
trying
to achieve one Wrong verb form
try
task
, it overwhelm
us. It Change the verb form
overwhelms
make
us less productive than Change the verb form
makes
actually
we are. It Add a comma
,actually
also
creates a
boredom and leads to anxiety.Remove the article
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For
example
if we are doing a math problem and we are unable to do it and we spend half an hour on it but still we cannot find any mistake Add a comma
,example
then
take a 5 minutes break and after that
you will be able to Add a comma
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found
the point where you were wrong because Wrong verb form
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whe
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when
we
are endlessly try
to do anything at one point our brain stop working properly because it Change the verb form
are endlessly trying
get
tired of it.Stopping for even Change the verb form
gets
couple
of minutes between tasks helps clear our mind and reset our focus Correct article usage
a couple
clear
on the Replace the word
clearly
next
task
.
In addition
to this
, when you get some time
for yourself you can utilize that time
to
some entertaining activities Change preposition
for
instead
of following your regular schedule. It will make you more active and life can become more enthuthiastic
. When we work regularly we think we are Correct your spelling
enthusiastic
acheiving
more Correct your spelling
achieving
task
but in Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
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longer-term
longer
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the longer
term
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this
is actually contributing to more stress which we do take back home and it affects our personal life without realizing. Additionally
, working harder doesnot
equal to smarter. Correct your spelling
does not
doesn't
Moreover
, it creates more fatigue and result
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the result
is
less overall productiveness.Correct your spelling
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Finally
, There
are multiple studies conducted on tired brain and it clearly shows more we burn ourselves out, we see issues with brain functions Correct your spelling
there
such
as,
decreased Remove the comma
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hand eye
coordination, poor motor skills and so on.
To sum up,in order to improve overall mental health, we should focus on devoting some Add a hyphen
hand-eye
time
in a day where we either do something we enjoy, clear our train of thoughts or simply do nothing. In Add a hyphen
longer-term
longer
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the longer
term
we will surely see stress reduction and improved focus which actually increases our productivity and helps us be more successful.Add a comma
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