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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that plenty of food and products nowadays contain a large amount of
sugar
, which is not good for maintaining a healthy diet.
Although
 there are opinions about raising the price of these dishes could help in promoting using less sweetened food, I do not fully agree with
this
 solution since it does not directly address the problem of building a good lifestyle. Though making sugary more expensive could cause
people
 to buy them less frequently, it does not prevent them from consuming a large number of sweets. Manufacturers cannot rocket the price drastically, which will damage their business.
However
, if they only level it up a bit,
people
 with high incomes could still be able to afford what they are addicted to. A number of rich
people
 have reported that they do not mind paying for the doubled price bar of chocolate if its quality is good.
Moreover
, for the part of p
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with small budget and cost may really be their consideration, they will try other alternatives, which are both cheaper and richer in
sugar
, to satisfy their desire. Some of my friends even bought ingredients with lots of
sugar
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sweetened cuisines, which the food and beverage producers could do nothing about. In conclusion, increasing the cost of sweetened products does little in helping
people
 be more aware of the disadvantages of using much
sugar
 in their meals, and
thus
, not an effective idea in encouraging the community to lessen the
sugar
 amount in their diet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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