In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles would be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

There are different opinions about the pros and cons of having buses and trucks run automatically without the existence of drivers. In my opinion, the merits of

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future of means of transportation outweigh the downsides it may bring about. The most obvious advantage of these vehicles is that they are no

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will prevent unwanted accidents caused by drivers' faults. Another positive aspect of driverless cars is that they free us from driving tasks.

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, people sitting inside these automobiles could have more opportunities to enjoy their trip. Electric cars which are programmed and allowed to run in some modern residential areas are good examples f

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since they allow customers to have sightseeing when travelling without worrying about the routes. O

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another perspective, pre-scheduled types of transportation may cause the passengers trouble if they are not properly instructed at the beginning.

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means if the map to the destination directs these vehicles falsely, there will be a high chance travellers will be delivered to the wrong place. In reality, there were cases where people fully relied on the guidance given to the automatic cars,

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got lost in the middle of nowhere.

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brought them to lots of unwanted situations, especially for the guests from far away who did not know much about the region. In conclusion,

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there are some disadvantages related to technology, driverless transportations brighter sides surely overwhelm the problems. In the future, when solutions for correcting the guidance are raised, there will be l

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cases of driving people incorrectly, and

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, automatic vehicles will gradually gain more attention and become an essential part of our life.