You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved
Dear Mr John,
I am writing to you about the college cafeteria, and I must say that it's one of the best around. Just to name a few good things about
this
place. First
of all, it has the right ambience for every particular part of the day and talking about the food, it is awesome, especially the local dishes.
However
, I won't be able to say wonderful things about the customer service delivery at the restaurant. The services do not reflect the good nature of the cafetaria
. I have practically seen a staff shouting at a guest, Correct your spelling
cafeteria
also
I have seen leftover foods on the table staying for long and not cleared.
From my side, I would suggest that the front office staff be trained in order to get the details of their job. Also
, a little change of the entre
workforce won't be a bad idea, there might be Correct your spelling
entire
need
to release some people and get new interns to support. We actually have a good cafeteria, Correct article usage
a need
however
, we can have a better cafeteria by improving the services delivered to the people.
I do hope my points are clear, and I will be expecting to see some positive changes over time. Thank you and have a wonderful day ahead.
Yours sincerely,
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